Here is my writing about the opening scene of a short pixar animation called La Luna.
One peaceful night the shimmering stars were reflected in the calm ocean like a mirror, It was still with only a few gentle waves. The sky had a tint of purple, the glowing moon was creating an ombre effect in the sky.
A bulky man rowed the boat with strong strokes through the water leaving foamy bubbles behind. It pushed through the smooth water causing ripples to form. A little boy on the boat peered at the oars mesmerised by each stroke.
Hi Mya! My name is Sammi. I am a Senior at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, AL in the United States. I will be summarizing your post on my blog, Sammi Taylor, for my EDM 310 class. I really enjoyed reading your post about the opening to the short animation La Luna. I particularly like the part about the shimmering stars reflecting on the calm ocean and the part where the strokes, caused by the rowing of the boat, left foamy bubbles behind. Your descriptions are so vivid. I can close my eyes and get visuals in my mind just by your words. I hope you will summarize the rest of the animation. I can't wait to see what happens next. Can I find this animation online? Did your class watch the animation at school? I hope you have a great school year!
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